I am new blogger and write 4 blogs recently, is my blogs readable?

Please read my 4 blogs at http://coolingstar9.wordpress.com


any suggestion to make my blogs more interesting? thanks


From coolingstar9

I am new blogger and write 4 blogs recently, is my blogs readable?
Coolingstar,


I came from your blogs and I found them readable. I like one you did on positive attitudes


then enjoying your work


surfing the internet


and of course your beginning in blogging.





Even when I took it up


I did a blog on beginning


without criticizing if there is a spell check on yours


you can check the spelling on some words.


Planning to write down a blog its good to have it written down first this is to see if you want to make changes.


It would be a good idea to find out what types of blogs people like to read on although I see you got some comments.
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Reply:If you want the truth your grammar and spelling are awful.
Reply:Hi. Just going through ur blogs. Just b4 I move on - dude it's nothing short of blasphemy when a spelling mistake is made/ a grammatical goof up %26amp; later on it's the usage of words.


YET I FEEL U HAVE A TALENT.


Continue %26amp; do so consciously. Soon the results (applauds) will speak for themselves %26amp; jet ur confidence. All wishes to best blogging!














hey its jamie.....she has finally hit 3rd grade...CONGRATS! Jamie u are an encouraging person NO DOUBT!
Reply:Hi again Coolingstar,





I think you try very hard to make your points on subjects, and the blog isn't that bad with the exception of some connas, capital letters that don't need to be, and too many spaces in some places.





Try to use you MS-Word spell check more often, but remember, some words although spell check says they're fine are actually the wrong type of word.





Go back over what you have and see what you can clean up in the blog. You have a great attitude. I think Lori Seaborn makes some good points as well. Her's, like mine, is constructive criticism.





As far as the other's who answered, remember this, they've actually done you a favor. A critique can be as cutting as a sharp blade. Learn to get used to it. Writer's learn to live with this with everything they write. If you can get one of these people to tell you that you did a great job . . . and mean it . . . then you're on your way.





PJ M

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